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for Falling For You

by foamyfan15010

person Sex For Guitars
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, it\'s moving...rather quickly. No problem though, because I\'m lovin\' it.
Awesomeness abound!
Rock on!
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! All I can say is wow! I didn\'t get to review \"Everything you want\" before you finished it, but I think you are a brilliant writer! I can\'t wait to see what you have up your sleeve for this story! Please update soon!

-Kaye
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! ...please
person iotc247
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No offense in any way but I think I am going to stop reading this. Just not my type of romance... I don\'t particularly like it when things move fast so I am sorry. But good luck with it. (Remember I\'m not saying its bad, just not my type of story)
person Arainaina
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting chapter please update again soon
person Angel
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiice Start (only finished the first chapter)! Love it so far!
person Lady Rain
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story and nice chap in three. I like this Devon guy already. And I can\'t help but wonder....why can\'t there ever be guys like that where I am? I mean seriously.

Oh well, I\'m looking forward to that next update! Keep it rollin\'!
person Theresa
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter i have a feeling as long as no one dies i\'ll be extremely happy
person Brianna
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i like how this one is starting out... and im glad to hear that there wont be any death in this story... i really dont enjoy crying LOL. Devon seems like a very confident sexy character, i like it :) lol. I really enjoy reading your writing, my favourite so far is everything you want, but im starting to get into this one too. Keep up the writing :) i need something to read thats interesting when i come home from work lol.

-brianna
person iotc247
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Mr. Pierce is heading for deep water there.. (Make her kick his ass!!) And well I guess Im not a normal guy (Geek and all) so that maybe why I skip the sex seens and hope for the romance...