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for Falling For You

by foamyfan15010

person me myself an i
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello again!! sure ... i love to make compliments .. as long as i\'m writing them and not actually talking to someone xD

well i liked this chapter very much, the dialogues were heated and interesting .. and i have a feeling that they like each other more than they want to admit ... pfff.. bre is happy?? hah .. no one can believe her! the only time she was really happy in this story, although she felt a bit guilty, was the good time she had with devon xDD ....

i like that pairing .. they seem to fit together ... but can it be that something happend with our bad boy? he seemed so .. angry when bre told him that he was also covering himself ...

oh well, hope you update soon!!

bye bye ^__^
person Rita
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is reaaly good I am loving this two characters and the relationship between them, You made me cry with that beautifull story of cole and bella but this one is interesting especially because what girl can resist danger when it come in the form of a sexy bad boy, I now I can\'t !!!!!!
person Leylia
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha...I think I see where you\'re going with this. Interesting...as opposed to damn near every other fic on this site, you\'re going to start with the sex, then move on to the sweet romantic stuff. Awesome! Again I say, you\'re so good at character development! It\'s like your stories are really about the people, and not just the plots. Does that make sense? In any case, keep up the good work. I\'m excited to see where things go here.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you develop your characters! Like some other people on here have said, it\'s amazing to watch the characters grow and change with each chapter. The plot of a story is what keeps it moving forward, but I think it\'s the characters that keep readers reading ans coming back for more. Excellent!!! Can\'t wait for more!!! -Kaye
person Wolf
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter :D, fucking told u id read it when u hit chap 7. (hits u with a pillow)
person me myself and i
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my oh my .. i happy that this isn\'t one of those PWP\'s .. because i\'m really sick of them .. but i\'m more happy that this story is soo good! it\'s really a pleasure reading it because of your beautiful writing.. the plot so far is just as great and you formed pretty fitting characters, who i might ad, sound gorgous^^
pls keep on writing and update soon!
bye bye ^__^
person Sex For Guitars
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, this story is great. Hot and developed! I\'m lovin the conflicting fireworks between these two kids. And I\'m SO glad that we\'ve moved away from Meet The Beaver. More like...late night HBO now.
Awesome as usual!
Rock on!
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Freaking Awesome!!!! Keep up the EXCELLENT writing!!! I am so happy I found your stories!!!
person Arainaina
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter please update soon
person Arainaina
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please update again soon I wish to see what happens next