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by JayDeth

person darkgodess64
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought to be a very good fanfic, I like it a lot!!!
hope to see more fanfics or chapter up soon!!!
Nice work!!!
person you know who this is lol XD
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story. very.....different.. cant wait till the next chapter is done. it has so many excitement..... i loved it. =) because it was done by a very talented auther..
person JoeyOtaka
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i realy liked that...i expetialy like how you threw in the japonese names with it, it makes me long for more...much like when a comic book ends right in the middle of something..it was very good and i enjoyed it ^^;;;....i\'m not one for alot of words but what i say i mean...anyway ^^ i\'ve never done a review b4 that i know of...but there it is ^^

keep up the good work ^^

~Joey ^^
person Sammeh
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it.

The imagery you use is awesome. Keep up the great work!
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very skllfully written. The way you introduced the various characters during the course of the assasination attempt gave the story an immediate sense of urgency. And the last two images, of the golden heart covered with blood, and the sorrowful chiming of the bell, were quite powerful. It definitely made me want to read more.

Love,
Falcon