rate_review Reviews

OMG that was soooo fucking hot!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it! Please continue!

you are a sick person and your going to hell for this. i\'m sure you did every last thing youwrote about. i hate you because you are a nasty dirty person and all who read and like your story are going to follow you into a firey hell. If you die tomorrow i hope you know heaven is not a current option. Repent. i understand people get off writing this kinda shit but when you bring god into this and disresoect him you disrespect all he did for you. He died for you. If you try to tell the Lord your sorry you better mean it. he knows your mind and judges you by it.

I thought it was very good. A lot better and hotter than most fics posted on this site :-)

Ehh. . . nothing a father would do. . . oh well! AWESOME! Make more of dese! You give such concrete details, and it shows that you take much care nd pride into your work.

Keep it up!


-Vinny