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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
People seem to smirk and grin a lot in your story. Basically this could have been a decent story have you given any effort to writing it. You obviously have your way with words, but this was a complete turn-off for me, because
a) the complete lack of any foundation for the story nor the characters ( I don't call describing the priest as green-eyed bronzed hunk and telling that the girl just happened to wonder there a good story base)
b) the completely unpleasant antagonist
I think the romantic in me just died a little, again.
a) the complete lack of any foundation for the story nor the characters ( I don't call describing the priest as green-eyed bronzed hunk and telling that the girl just happened to wonder there a good story base)
b) the completely unpleasant antagonist
I think the romantic in me just died a little, again.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit awesum story! it mad me so wet!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She tried to fuck her cat!???????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking hot.
Discusted: Your over here telling us about how were reading a great story and going to hell for it well, I\'ve got something to say about that. I am personally telling you to GO TO HELL!!! You knew what this story was about before you read it, but yet you still read it. SINNER!...bitch
This is a great story! gotta write another. i love it.
Discusted: Your over here telling us about how were reading a great story and going to hell for it well, I\'ve got something to say about that. I am personally telling you to GO TO HELL!!! You knew what this story was about before you read it, but yet you still read it. SINNER!...bitch
This is a great story! gotta write another. i love it.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story made me so wet i love it
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, priests are men too...the pig\'s blood stuff was weird, though...did you ever read that book called \"the name of a rose\"? set in medieval times, etc in a remote monastery etc, this story kind of reminded me of that.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great. It was so different. Keep writing:)
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very similar to a story by sticky shoes called the confession.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear \"disgust\",
First, \"God\" is capitalized. I\'d think you should know that considering you\'re freaking out over a work of fiction and sputtering things about Hell.
Second, You\'re also on an adult website, which I\'m pretty sure isn\'t a holy thing to do.
Third, You\'re the one who clicked on her fanfiction and read it, taking the time to leave a review.
You\'re certainly not the sharpest tool in the shed. But, you are a tool.
First, \"God\" is capitalized. I\'d think you should know that considering you\'re freaking out over a work of fiction and sputtering things about Hell.
Second, You\'re also on an adult website, which I\'m pretty sure isn\'t a holy thing to do.
Third, You\'re the one who clicked on her fanfiction and read it, taking the time to leave a review.
You\'re certainly not the sharpest tool in the shed. But, you are a tool.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love these types of stories and would love to read more of this one. Maybe have her suck him off during mass or something.