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for Deception

by romancelover

person Romance Lover
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
also I wanted to answer some questions that I know I would have asked if I were a reader-
Where did Jonathan get his ratty clothes?
why did Mrs. Lampley tell Florence who Jonathan really is?
What are Emily\'s duties as a companion?
etc.
I am a very detail oriented person so I\'ll do my best not to leave any plot holes or forget certain details.
If you find anything you think I have accidentally missed, please let me know!
person Blue
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM


Nice, not as entertaining as the other chapters - rather uneventfull, but I see that it needs to be done, setting the scene for future events I imagine (I hope). Keep it up!

- Don\'t you just love mischievous old ducks, they\'re such a delight!
person Romance Lover
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for the reviews! It really helps push me to write! I am currently working on ch. 6, so keep checking! :)
person Super G
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really an interesting story. I like how you\'re not rushing it. Please continue to update, and don\'t feel discouraged by the lack of reviews.
person Reader
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must agree with you on how the early 20th centry is one of the most romantic periods. Thank you for finally putting up a story with this time period up on AFF. Keep on writing. It makes me smile!
person flower
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love historical romances, they are one of my favorite type of books. keep up the good work
person kiki
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story. keep up the good work!
person Cass
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love it! I myself am an advocate of romance novels, and your story is remakably written.
person AngelBabie32
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!1 Such a good story, i love it, please continue and do the wonderful job ur doing. i\'ll keep on the reivews and encouragements! also ur the first to do a story from that time period, i love that time period and i feel that there isn\'t enough stories like that, it\'s all about sluts and whores these days.
person fili
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quite promising. there\'s so many different ways this could go-- i\'m so intruiged.
thanks for the new chapter!

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