schedule
September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
in all honesty, i had a hard time with the flow of it. i can relate to the feelings and what inspired it, as i've just recently went through something with someone dear. however, as writing goes, it's kind of choppy. i'm not sure if that's what you were going for or not, though.
schedule
March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just like all the rest of your poetries, this is eloquently written!