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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I like it much better this way. Build on this. It'll turn out great!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spider Spider Hammer is just being Hammer ALL THE TIME. I am so into this fic I just started back to reading it got side tracked but I still love it keep going i must know if ahmmer will turn or will ASel save JAyme.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Asel to the rescue. Dude I love Hammer can you turn him from his path of destruction even if it's in the last hour or chapter. OKay I love Hammer Great story keep going.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter,action-packed just the way I like them.
looking forward to all hell breaking loose; also good lemon writing I\'m glad that you, unlike some, don\'t feel the need to put down every moan and groan and sound effect for your readers. Thats not to say this ain\'t a hot! hot! story \'cause it is.
looking forward to all hell breaking loose; also good lemon writing I\'m glad that you, unlike some, don\'t feel the need to put down every moan and groan and sound effect for your readers. Thats not to say this ain\'t a hot! hot! story \'cause it is.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude what! Hammer is bad. That\'s so cool!!!!!! I love this great chapter Keep going
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story. It would be great if you continued it.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, the suspence and the tension come off the page rather well.
like to read more as soon as you can update,of course.
like to read more as soon as you can update,of course.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update this. i like it
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just read all the story so far in one go and i found it to be a very engrossing read.
keep up the good work and hopefully will be able to read more soon.
keep up the good work and hopefully will be able to read more soon.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh Dude I like Hammer and Jayme and his torture method on the Captain HEE HEE