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by wydow

person Lorna
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic have I said that before I will the intrigue you got going on with Bronwyn and Spirit. What will he do if he finds out she is evil. Hammer and his metal men are magnificent. I can not wait for you to add more Spider this is terrific.
person Bluflame
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the feel of this story I like how it is written from Hammer's view. I love his droids i thinks is sweet how you laid this out keep going please
person lil'bit
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Asel is so dead. You must udate this asap okay March 1, this is getting good I love this and all your characters keep going.
person Lorna
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this Story. I love sci fi and this is my favorite. Keeper going Spider this is awesome.
person Hornet
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I began reading this yesterday and have come to the conclusion that I starve for more of Hammer. You must go on. This is magnificent. really i love it.
person Anonymous
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Exciting! Keep going.
person SafeHaven
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are healed I could not wait for you to update and I still cant this was MAGNIFICENT SPIDER I love everyone in this story keep going. I want to see Asel get bent.
person Kraven
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see transitors flying and metaliic screams. I can't believe Asel would do that to Hammer and Jayme. I thought he was alrigt but it turns out that Spirit is the better. Excellent stuff Spider
person Rhayn
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE THIS WAS SUPERB!!!! I LOVE TTHIS HAMMER IS SO SWEET. ASEL IS SO DEAD AND THE RED DRIODS IF THEY GET ON THE SHIP NOTHING BUT METAL. I LOVE THIS DID I SAY ALREADY KEEP GOING SPIDER!!!
person Rhayn
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this rewrite Spider excellent job now continue on this path I love Hammer and Jayme dude.