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by wydow

schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spider this is amazing this story you have here. I love the mystery and Greenwich a HUMANOID AWESOME!!! You have got to update Soon I will be waiting.
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap he's a MACHINE! Dude Spider you have to update I need to know how this came about. Wonderful story!!
person Della Bear
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah I am in bliss you have updated and Greenwich has some stuff to tell me. I hope Hammer finds out about him. THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOOOOODDDDDD!!!!!! More.
person maccam
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i have to say that i'm very impressed with this story. I can't wait to read more. please update!!!
person evoD
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He is just like Hammer able to be anyone. Oh Spider this is AWESOME I need more update please.
person caramel
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this today and i love it! Im looking forward to ur next update.
person WTLM
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I can not wait for you to update. GReenwich - Hammmer a connection?
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness He is a machine this just KEEPS ROLLING MORE PLEASE!!!!
person Shadowknight
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A twisted little story you have here. Outside of a few minor spelling/grammar flubs, the story flows fast and furious. I can say that the minor flaws don't detract much from thirteen chapters of the tale. I'll keep an eye out for this tale, as I want to see how it ends up. :D
person wydow
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I finally had the time to fix all of my flubs and oh my goshs. I will post another chapter sometime this week and if I annoyed anyone with all the posting I am sorry. Spider