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by wydow

person Autumn
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was a little unsure, at first, about reading this story as i'm not big on droid stories, but was pleasantly suprised. It has an intriguing story line and keeps you guessing about the characters. The writing style is easy to follow and all though there are a few spelling mistakes and misplaced words, they don't interfere with the story. It's well worth the read and i'm looking forward to the next chapter('s?) being posted.
person Rosei
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the big, big, grey guy!!!

Excellent sci-fi!!! Good descriptions, interesting story,
and great semi-non-con sex!!!!

What more could a fan want?!!! Can't wait 'till Hammer meets
up with his nemesis and grinds him to dust!!! HA!!!

Thanks,
R

schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please continue writing it.

I love the story of Mange and Brownyn. I wonder if she is dead or did he create a humaniod to look like her to keep her safe. He did say he was anxious to return home. Is she waiting for him. MORE!!!!!
person Mackrel
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo good. I love the universe you have created here. I love all the chracters. This could become a series IF you updated with more regularity. PLEase update again I love this. DOT
person lil'bit
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome as said before. I love the backstory about Mange. I have questions about Bronwyn... Is she dead or since Mange can assume anyone's appearance did he do something with Bronwyn's appearance? Beautiful writing and Trully AWESOME story Please update AGAIN..SPIDER!! PlEASE!
person koimiko
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you decided to update. This story is amazing turly amazing can't wait until the next update
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and find it to good to stop reading. please update soon(sobbing)Pleaeseee.
person lil'bit
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so much easier to read. HURRY up with the editing and UPDATE I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!
person whatever
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please I have been waiting for a while.
person DawnOfTime
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update I love this story!!!!!!!