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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story, but somehow I feel that it would\'ve been better if the first chapter would\'ve been a stand alone, and the rest of the story would\'ve been another fic. It was so well written and the angsty ambience was beautiful and the characters so well done, the chemistry between them perfect... I hate to say this, but the continuation cheapened that quite a bit. Also you manage to load the same chapter twice, in 2 and 3.