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for Taidama

by sakuratsubasa

person Nenesama
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^-^ i dunno but you're cute!! how old are you anyway, if you dont mind? 'cause honestly the plot should be nice but the way you write.. uhh maybe you're too young? oh no dont take it badly, you really make me smile in a different way!
person midorikawa
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooow ^.^ That was...short and sweet =D
person Eitriarch
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I commented on one of your pictures on Y!Gallery and you told me this was the fic ^^

I thought it was a cute story but it was a little hard to tell who was talking. A new paragraph startes when a different person starts talking. Just thought I'd point that out. Anyhow nice chapter you have here. Hopefully you will add some more =D
person Eiri (yanno who I am~!)
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Good stuff, ane-chan! And you said first chapter, which means there\'s more to come :3 So I shall be watching very carefully ^__^

Love love ^^
person Magaman
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is terrific esty, plain and simple, cant wait to read the next chapter :). Good work!!!!