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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank God, a sequel. Everything was brilliant, as usual. Can\'t wait to read more!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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...SEQUEL! :D!! And it\'s absolutely wonderful so far! *settles happily in and waits for another chapter*
...SEQUEL! :D!! And it\'s absolutely wonderful so far! *settles happily in and waits for another chapter*
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"like paper curling in the heat of a flame\" this is my favorite description, how clever of you, you nasty piece of work! Well written, thoughtfully planned, nothing left out, spelling OK. No wonder you\'ve published some short stories. Isn\'t this a gas? Some flavor of \"Constantine\" with the bar scene, however. Dare I point it out? ooh, darn, already did. I\'m somewhat chagrined, but not much. Nice going.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good start. it is intriguing to say the least. I read all of the first story in one sitting and found this one shortly after so I am reviewing. I really felt choked up when Marzi was dying. I might just be a masochist but I want Kale and Marzi to end up together. I don\'t know after everything that has happened how that could work but I want it to.Suprise me with a better alternative if kale/marzi isn\'t possible