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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you intermix the different characters and their emotions. Right now, I can\'t decide whether I love or hate Marzi or whether I love or hate Nicholas. I love the story and can\'t wait for more!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always! I can\'t wait for the next chapter. :D
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at ch5: poor tormented marzi. what a dilemma. if not for the noble cause of his sister\'s life...she is his saving grace. >sighs<
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch4: ended on wonderful note. what tangled webs are you weaving, my dear? Can\'t wait to see this play out.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very clever. Plenty of hints and clues as to what might happen. Your writing is so entertaining and I eagerly await the next chapter.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got some sleep in the doctor\'s waiting room a couple hours ago.... Not the most comfortable place to sleep, but it works out. ^^ So now for a more comprehensive review... Once again, wonderful. I love the way Nicholas is developing as a character, sorta a nice guy in a venal sort of way. :D Much of Kudos~
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy that I went back to re-read parts of \'Sugar Hearts\' and found that you have a sequel already underway! The first three chapters are wonderful and I can\'t wait to find out what will happen next.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! Pepper\'s gonna get some! YAAAAAAAY! WRITE MORE SOON (don\'t be holding out...)!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heart shaped steam... :D! Cutest image ever. I once more eagarly await the next chapter~ (And excuse my crappy review, I haven\'t slept in six days. ^^)
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story its really interesting