rate_review Reviews

I guess after stalking your work for weeks, I should review and show my utmost awe at having read this - it\'s beautiful.

^-^ Sort of like, one of those sugar-spun snowflakes... Though, maybe the tinge of sadness you added was enough, I just started crying for no reason after I read the last chapter.

Thank you very much for writing this, each and every chapter absorbs me into their world, it\'s all crystal clear. A frightening clarity, I guess.

And I guess I have to thank you for introducing me to Josh Groban\'s music, so thank you for this story, and the music that seems to fit it perfectly.

i am agog. mmmm reading this is like eating candy. There are so many pictures that come to mind when you describe the things the way you do.

Ack. They never catch a break, do they? Poor Pepper... Absolutely amazing chapter. ^^

As for my stories... I wasn\'t the one who deleted them. :/ They got deleted by administration; I\'m underage, I was caught. I have no right to complain. Now I just have to find a way to get them again and find a new place to post them. *begins hunt*

eivnoiehtoijahefgoijaroithnsdkfpsk (bangs forehead on computer keyboard) Sure hope that Nicholas is going to get his act together and help Pepper kick some demon ass! That prophecy sounded promising, but I never know what to expect with your stories. Very good chapter - you certainly know how to ratchet up the tension. Please post again soon. :)

Suspenseful~ :D I love the characterization you put into these stories. It makes them seem so real! ^_^

Waahhhh! Oh no, Marzi and Pepper in trouble again. Very tense chapter and a cliffie too. Hope you update soon because the suspense is turning me inside out.

@8: crap! damn! Curses! Whew, my heart is in my throat. You certainly have a certain turn of phrase that keeps things interesting.

Too lazy to log in... XD Another beautiful chapter; I love the imagery! Running through the rain... <3!

Once again, a wonderful picture is painted with your magical words that seems so apt. \"..a handful of greasy marbles..\" for instance, and all the lovely background tension you are building up is really quite enticing, yet they are only going out for coffee...wow.

That was romantic, beautiful and hot. And oh so many complications. I love that line: \"But recently, my brother and I have gotten a lot closer.\" HA! Can\'t get any closer than those two. I agree with you - an excellent chapter. Bravo!