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Amazing chapter. I\'m feeling more hopeful for Pepper and Nicholas, and even Marzi. The part with Nicholas singing brought tears to my eyes. Your writing is superb!!!

hey thanks for the comments you give me. I like to give you a comment on your work. I really like your writing. This story is really oringinal, very unexpected. I hope you update soon. ^.^

*cheers* Marzi! You can do it!

Really caught up in this chapter - there was an uplifting tone to it. The song Nicholas sang - I wonder if they heard it?

...I really hope Nicholas doesn\'t die, he\'s a great human - like the rest of us. Not everyone has the strength to sing while their probably going to die from blood-loss while their true love looks on from inside an enchanted mirror. ...I really hope he doesn\'t die, but we\'ll see.

I am somewhat surprised to see Sylvia back - I had thought she had left. But, I guess I was wrong. The conversation between Marzi and her was a mixture of hope, and eternal despair. ^-^

I really like how you went into Kale\'s past - you\'re making us suddenly see him as someone behind the cold-blooded bastard that he usually portrayed himself as - and who he basically is. It\'s almost as if you\'re delving into his more human side here, can demons rise?

I\'ll have to cut this off here - or I\'ll continue babbling on about every small thing I like about this chapter. This is now my favorite chapter! ^-^

Conundrums and dilemmas, what a twisted tale of woe. How is Pepper getting out of that mirror, or will she? I\'ve got to see how you manage that one. I\'m not sure I can root as easily for Marzi. Kale seems almost like an addiction to him. What complex characters you have created!

\'L\'amore Vincera\'

That somehow, seems to be the theme. With a major, somewhat demonic twist.

It\'s sad, and I\'m not sure how your going to end it - nor whether it will be a happy ending, or a bittersweet ending. Or it could be and ending that points out how ironic life can be.

The only thing I know is that it will take divine intervention - or human will-power - to escape the mess their in.

...after all, it\'s not like Nicholas could sing Pepper out of the mirror, and it\'s not like Marzi hasn\'t given up.

I\'m eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ^-^ Thank you!

Whew! I thought for sure that Nicholas would discover that Pepper was in Marzi and Marzi\'s body was...well anyway, you solved a whole lot of awkwardness! Smooth, very smooth.

The part with Pepper walking away from the mirror gave me chills. Such vivid writing! It\'s a good thing I don\'t bite my nails when I\'m nervous or I wouldn\'t be able to type by now. Keep up the good work and thank you for such an excellent story. Please post again soon.

*blushes* Thank you - though I really think I layed it on a little thick.

I can see why this would be your \'other favorite chapter\'. It\'s nicely written, and it shows Marzi battling basically, with his inner demon. If you don\'t mind the bad pun.

I was wondering when you were going too have Marzi be told that he wasn\'t Pepper\'s actual brother. ...T-T But I really didn\'t want that too happen! \'Cause now he won\'t be able to think of it the same way... maybe he was broken by those words... T_T

Heh, Yeah, Josh Groban\'s music is wonderful. Thank you for this chapter! ^-^

@10: oh, how the mighty have fallen! I will once again reiterate the love i have for the way you sprinkle those analogies and similies here and there. they jump out at me, yet their aptness astounds. The sticky residue was a nice touch. At first, i thought you meant sugar (who knew?), then realized it was that nasty duct tape, and it truly is like that!

Oh no... tainted love. I have a sad feeling that Marzi may not be redeemed this time. Good chapter.