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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^-^ *drools over chapter* Yeah!!!
Kale\'s POV was wonderful - the way he acted, and reacted... I was convinced he had stabbed Marzi for a moment.
So... a trilogy? ^-^ I\'ll be a very, very faithful reader! After all, these guys have issues, and Pepper lives in a compact... I wonder, and this just randomly occurred to me, if Nicholas began talking to her in a public place, how many people would be convinced he\'s insane? ...^-^; Heh. I loved this chapter, though I wonder what\'s going to happen next. ...anything could happen... but from what I can think of, Nicholas hasn\'t broken his deal with Balbeirth, so there should be no issues on that end, and Kale has Marzi... so...
Nope, nothing. Thank you for this chapter! ^-^
Kale\'s POV was wonderful - the way he acted, and reacted... I was convinced he had stabbed Marzi for a moment.
So... a trilogy? ^-^ I\'ll be a very, very faithful reader! After all, these guys have issues, and Pepper lives in a compact... I wonder, and this just randomly occurred to me, if Nicholas began talking to her in a public place, how many people would be convinced he\'s insane? ...^-^; Heh. I loved this chapter, though I wonder what\'s going to happen next. ...anything could happen... but from what I can think of, Nicholas hasn\'t broken his deal with Balbeirth, so there should be no issues on that end, and Kale has Marzi... so...
Nope, nothing. Thank you for this chapter! ^-^
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m trying to figure this out: if Pepper goes back into Marzi\'s body, then is Marzi going to be spending time with Nicholas and Kale? He\'s going to be one busy fellow. :) Won\'t Kale get jealous even if it is Pepper who\'s in control at the time. And then there\'s Sylvia also, although I have the feeling that she\'ll just carry a torch for Marzi and not confess her love for him. I\'m sure that I\'m jumping the gun here because this isn\'t the end of the story so I\'ll be looking for the next update. Great chapter and the greatest news of all: This will be a trilogy! I bow to your awesome story telling skills.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@ 15: Ah, so! Pepper has become a mere talisman. Interesting. A talisman disguised as a toy. From McDonald\'s no less. You had me guessing as to the significance of the toy Sylvia carried to Nicholas. Very well done. YOu must have been rubbing your hands in glee outsmarting us all like that! Fav description: \"like thirty-five years of unspoken prayers\" God, how do you think this up? Rivetting.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Yeah! Now to escape, though I\'m really hoping that no one decided to post someone outside the back door - in the state he\'s in right now, Nicholas wouldn\'t be able to fend off another human, let alone a demon.
Hmm, so Pepper is able to pass through mirrors if they have blood on them? Is that because it\'s the lifeblood of someone else who willingly wished her passage - though in the first ritual, she was forced from her brother\'s body. That\'s a question to ponder on rainy days. ^-^ Heh, other than that, I can\'t come up with anything witty to say.
Thank you. ^-^ Let\'s go save Marzi, and resolve everything happily ever after. One twisted fairy-tale at a time.
Hmm, so Pepper is able to pass through mirrors if they have blood on them? Is that because it\'s the lifeblood of someone else who willingly wished her passage - though in the first ritual, she was forced from her brother\'s body. That\'s a question to ponder on rainy days. ^-^ Heh, other than that, I can\'t come up with anything witty to say.
Thank you. ^-^ Let\'s go save Marzi, and resolve everything happily ever after. One twisted fairy-tale at a time.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smart trick with the mirror. I thought something like that might show up, but didn\'t get it unitl they talked about the makeup compact. Very good chapter. PLease update again soon!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. i really liked that chapter, and thank for the warm welcome. i\'m sure i\'ll enjoy the stay. please update soon.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah for Sylvia! I\'m glad that Nicholas will be okay and I\'m looking forward to reading the next chapter. Your writing is always fresh and entertaining. Thanks for posting.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicholas is still alive? ...two days, huh. Wow, that must really hurt.
*cheering for Sylvia* She seems the most active person right now, the only person geared to move. Kale is obsessed in either not feeling anything at all, or denying that he can feel something. Pepper is trapped in the mirror, and Nicholas was struck down with head trauma.
So, other than them... there\'s no one else in this story that can help.
Another great chapter - I really love this story. I\'ve had a couple of crappy weeks, this story is really a bright point. ^-^
One spelling error that I saw - \'charkra\' is \'chakra\'
*cheering for Sylvia* She seems the most active person right now, the only person geared to move. Kale is obsessed in either not feeling anything at all, or denying that he can feel something. Pepper is trapped in the mirror, and Nicholas was struck down with head trauma.
So, other than them... there\'s no one else in this story that can help.
Another great chapter - I really love this story. I\'ve had a couple of crappy weeks, this story is really a bright point. ^-^
One spelling error that I saw - \'charkra\' is \'chakra\'
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a wonderful sequel. I can\'t wait to read your next chapter.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid work/school keeping me away from stories... This is really becoming... grabbing. :D And it\'s turning out almost exactly how I wanted it to when I first started reading (only a little bit better). ^^ Please update soon!