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by christinesantacruz

person kat
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to keep going please. But you need to check your grammer and spelling. Otherwise, really good.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW..
person 2wolfsistersLOgan
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u must update I loved it
person REadER
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. I hopy you\'ll continue it with a bunch of different scenes. In the bathroom, living room, in the middle of the night when the girl is sleeping and daddy is horny, everywhere in the house.
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but you need to pay more attention to your editing and words. Make sure you check your words carefully, you used \"slut\" where I think you wanted \"slit.\" Thanks for the story.
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t even begin to tell you how hot this story is! Normally I\'m not a fan of the incest stories, but hot damn... this one was good!