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oh yes they are dead! hehe...and it\'s about time they get caught!!

Oh, I just want to wring Ephasia\'s neck... Gr!!

Yay, Avery and Cyress kissing!! *Warm snugglies* ^_^

~~ Crushed

Very original idea! I like it!
So, what\'s it like when she\'s inside the bottle? Is she just out of it (unconscious)? Suspended in some featureless void? Reclining on couches (ala Barbra Eden)?
Why didn\'t her father immediately contact her mother when she dissappeared?
Avery\'s really nice, but his first wish should be to grow a backbone. I could understand him not wanting to hurt the feelings of someone really sweet and needy much easier than him putting up with that intolerant bitch.
Hmmm.. what else?... Wassup with her sister? Why? She deserves some truly diabolical comuppence!
Oh.. I hope that they don\'t end up too sticky sweet at the end. I mean, I want them to be happy, and have a happy ending, but some personality traits that involve real life give and take would be a refreshing change from the usual glowingly prefect couple at the end.
Great job so far! I\'ve enjoyed it! Keep updating!

ooooooooooooooh more please!!!

Her sister is such a bitch! I hope she gets hers soon! Great chapter. I hope to see another very soon!

Very nicely done, I like the tone of this story, and the humor, it\'s great keep it up!

I love it please update soon!

Argh! A cliffhanger!! Great story. Please continue soon.

Oh! Cliff hanger! What happens?? *Waits rather unpatiently* ~_^

Wow, this is very cool, I love the wry humor. I can\'t wait to see what happens between Avery & his stuffy Fiancee!