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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
R,
Wow. This is a powerful piece of work! My only criticisms are a few little spelling issues and maybe two or three word-choice changes to prevent repetition. This is the second piece of your's I've read and I must say your writing is gripping. I want to know what happens next!
T
Wow. This is a powerful piece of work! My only criticisms are a few little spelling issues and maybe two or three word-choice changes to prevent repetition. This is the second piece of your's I've read and I must say your writing is gripping. I want to know what happens next!
T
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is probably the only story that i have read so far that could move me to tears.
please update soon.
please update soon.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! You really get into your characters' heads like few can.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is raw and painful and so, so real. This is amazing!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was haunting. Amazing. Wow.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am only now just discovering the awesomeness of you. I read your other story and said to myself \"hey, let\'s read the rest.\" I really enjoyed this story and I love the way you describe...everything. You are a fantastic writer and hope you continue to let me receive the pleasure of a good story.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was immediately pulled by the failed attempt to take her own life. What would cause such desperation? Looking forward to more reveal ^_^