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WOW ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW!!!!!!!!! THIS IS REALLY THE BEST STORY EVER! It's extremely interesting and HOT!!!! WOW.... I need more, please, do you see me begging!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!

YAY!!!!! U updated the story ^^. I love the new chapter.. Awww Luc and CJ r hott together :P
well I hope u update soon i wanna knw what is gonna happpen next chapter

I was reading this story before but since its been so long i had to reread the whole thing. I think it is kyle who is doing everything. i thought so at the beginning and then i started to doubt myself with creepy Richard but I knew he was too obvious. Good suspense though.

holy crap. That's what I call a cliff hanger. I want to know what happens next. The story is pretty good. not the best. but pretty good. You might consider having a beta reader though.

I reall like ur story ^^ actualy i love it. I was hooked to the story since chapter 1 to 5. Please update it soon cause i really want to know what will happen next chapter. Its like a drug, i cant get enought of it. Lol. Please i beg of u, update the story asap

wow. This could use some work, Attempt to get rid of the two sided conversations where you use he said over and over and over. Then insted of giving a play by play of everything let it flow. right now you have. He walked. he sat. he smiled. Where as you could have. Taking his time he walked over to the bench looking around, There was nothing to really intrested him. But the sun shining on his pale skin warmed him, making him smile slightly... Big differance there... Maybe the rest of the chapters are better but until you get the play by play fixed i dont think i can read any more.

loving this more please!!!

Yay! an update! I Can\'t tell you how happy I am! but plz plz plzzz don\'t kill Luc, he\'s so... cute! yeah, I know what the curiosity did to the cat, but I can\'t help it! ^^
See ya!! =**

Alright, so EvilOne is either Kyle or Richard... *speculates* What I want to know is why the police don\'t suspect Luc, I mean he was the first to see each of the victims dead...
Please keep writing. And I sincerly hope you don\'t kill off Luc or CJ. Please!

omg another stalker themed story! MY FAVORITE!

AAAANyhow, nice story so far, don\'t go too overboard with the murders as it might lose credibility later on.