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for Pointillism

by CamliaWaite

person S
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I know you! Well, not really, no. But from the first chapter of this story I had the feeling that I must have read something of yours before since this story is so great, and ah ha! I\'ve read plenty! Only today I browsed your bio and realized that all those great stories had the same author.

So just so you know, I\'m bookmarking you. You\'re absolutely fabulous!
person susuc
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww no sex scene? T_T Well the story is still very good! i love it! more plz!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i seriously hope that message before chapter two means that you ARE going to continue this story.. it is too good to just stop now.. think of all the disappointed readers out there.... :(
person jayne
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope this means that you are no longer on a hiatus.. i read this fic and then started reading your other fics and love them all.. your descriptive ability is something to be proud of!
person V
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I know this is going to sound weird, but this story is so sweet! I\'m glad you continued because James and Rocky are so cute. I also like the lack of detailed physical description. This way I can constantly morph the way they look. Too cute! More chapters, please.
person Jessica
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well as they say, \"Those who jerk off together, stay together\"...O.O...heh heh...okay, so that was lame...-____-...anyway, I just wanted to say that story was short but cute...if you decide to due any more chapters, can you put a more descriptive summary of Jamie and Rocky? Thank you. ^_^
person turtledonkey27
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i really like this. i hope you decide to continue even further with it. these are two great characters and i\'m loving them both :)
person jayden
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic is fantastic! The characters are so real and interesting, im loving the growing relationship between them. I hope you keep writing!
person Katie
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luv this, seriously, this rocks. How old is James, by the way? And I hope James and Rocky are happy. Keep up the good work!