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for Pointillism

by CamliaWaite

person Anon
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love rocky!
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, keep up the good work and the charcters are really interesting!
person uncouthkitten
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Needed to say how much I really love this fic, the characters seem so warm and real, with some hang ups and baggage, just to keep it interesting. I find the way that you write makes the plot flow easily, descriptive but not \"flowery\", just snappy enough to keep you wanting more without being too long winded, or indeed too curt. Get the idea - I really like it! Eagerly looking forward to the next update, this story could clearly become addictive.
person keyonnamc
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. What on Earth is holding Rocky back...and why was he mad at James for talking dirty? I think that\'s suppose to be a turn on. I guess not. I really want their relationship to work...but maybe they really were moving to fast. Everyway they better get over it and start to show a little more action.
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person Kikvws
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! This is intruiging, please do continue. Loving the characters and plot, loving your angle.
person Heidi
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! It\'s such a sweet story (sexy, too ^.^), and it\'s wonderfully written, too. I can\'t wait for the next installment. Happy writing!

~Heidi
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was reading ur note in the beginining of chapter two about you weren\'t going to continue but you did..and i am soo glad u did. this story is great and i want to jump for joy when i see a new chapter updated! great work :)
person Rudemuch
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I LOVE your sense of humor. I\'ve only read chapters 1&2 but you have such a great talent for amusing dialogue. Love the story, I\'ll review again when I\'m done with chapter 3. I just had to compliment you on 1&2.
person Rudemuch
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jamie needs a fucking (Pardon my langauge).

Lol. I love this!!!
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what race is jaime?