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November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! You got the reviews and left everyone hanging for years so not fair.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey keep it up i want to se more f you could let me know or ill check up on this story latter
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do you want to update?
come on it sounds really interesting
come on it sounds really interesting
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more we want more
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good, you just need to put breaks between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls continue...
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning, please continue
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It looks really good so far. Please continue.. Can\'t wait to find out what happens next.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinda short for a beginning but still good. Let\'s see the next please.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty boring so far. if you aren\'t going to continue if you don\'t get enough good reviews, maybe you should write something a little longer and interesting. I\'m not saying another chapter or so might not make this into a good story, but so far it\'s not.