schedule
November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more! Give me more as soon as you can!!!
schedule
November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm. I didn\'t think this story could get any better. Surprise suprise for me! I adore the way you had Haru deal with the after math of the rape, it was original and pretains to his characteristics. There seems to be a nagging sense of foreboading about this chapter, the hope springing under the hands of fire!
Its also simply breath taking the clever way you had the majority of this chapter through Maif\'s point of view, it really gives an opening for your readers imaginations...:) Once again I am eager for your next chapter. Its very lovely to find a story that draws me in the way this one does!
YourLadyDeath
Its also simply breath taking the clever way you had the majority of this chapter through Maif\'s point of view, it really gives an opening for your readers imaginations...:) Once again I am eager for your next chapter. Its very lovely to find a story that draws me in the way this one does!
YourLadyDeath
schedule
October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ruthlessly beautiful. Sick, yet alluring. I love the darkness of it all. Beautiful story, beautiful characters, and beautiful wriiting. I do look forward to the next chapter! And may inspiration be upon you for my enraptured mind is now apprehensive.
Thank you for posting your works!
YourLadyDeath
Thank you for posting your works!
YourLadyDeath
schedule
October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this story is great, i like the plot till know and i can wait to read more of this, you took me by surprise with ending of the last chapter you posted. Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!
schedule
September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really awsome... Its hard to find even decently good ones these days, but I really do like this one. good job
schedule
September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellence as always, Omi! I\'m a bit sad that you have no time nor inclination to talk anymore, but that\'s the way things go, I suppose.
schedule
September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo Sex Candy. Give me some of that. More plzzzzzzzz!
schedule
August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter. I really enjoy the way you write. I can see quite clearly your landscape in my mind. You do use some interesting words in your story. Not many know the word grousing, so I was pleased to see it used correctly, kudos on the vocab. It makes for a story that\'s for sure. I\'m interested in Haru\'s father and what this other guy knows about him. I am looking forward to the next chapter and frankly you should have oodles of reviews. People don\'t know what they\'re missing.
Redfox
Redfox
schedule
August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your roommates friends hating you. Its tough living in dorms. Good luck with that.
Your story is awesome so far. I like the hint of scifi in this chapter and you did an excellent job setting up your story. Yes I like punishment...especially this kind. I have yet to read a DP story. This could get interesting. Can\'t wait for future updates and please don\'t rush the story. Take as many chapters as needed. I love a good long story. Take care.
Redfox
Your story is awesome so far. I like the hint of scifi in this chapter and you did an excellent job setting up your story. Yes I like punishment...especially this kind. I have yet to read a DP story. This could get interesting. Can\'t wait for future updates and please don\'t rush the story. Take as many chapters as needed. I love a good long story. Take care.
Redfox