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for Embrace II

by CholeAsterion

person Kozeta
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only have one word... WOW... that was just OMG so... i dont have other words then WOW. let me know if your going to make a secuell or whats it called.

hug from little o me ;-)
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I think sex is always hotter when there are strong emotions behind it, and you definitely suceeded in giving the reader two characters who have powerful feelings for each other. Even without having read your other stories, I could really feel the weight of their shared history, and understand how important this moment was to both of them. Also, I enjoyed the way you included lots of sensory details, like the way that Gideon smells. (Herbal shampoo -- lol!) Your use of all five senses in your descriptions really made them sensual and vivid.

Love,
Falcon