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\"Her ferretness\"? OY VEY I will never again look at that animal in the same light...every time I see one I will remember the story about her ferretness and big hairy balls stuck in her hair...Tragic I tell you...simply tragic...even bleach would not remove the horrible visions my eyes have seen. Anon-Y-Muse

Ah, yeah, I actually wrote this and my one other story up here as gifts for my boyfriend. Almost all the people in our group have animal aliases, Im ferret, he\'s bear. I was pressed for time when I was fixing these up, and I just found and replaced all the names, as to not embaress myself and my friends. The other guys are \"Amy\"\'s friends. The one she falls asleep with is \"her\" boyfriend. I plan on going back and editing these when I have time, because there is a lot of lingo from our group that would seem confusing to others. Really sorry about that, I guess I just wanted to get something up.

its pretty good...though you have to explain their relationships and why they decided to spring up on her all of a sudden....like why her? or why today? maybe a little more dialouge

I don\'t get the \"ferret\". Are you trying to make some kind of personal trademark or something? Cuz if you are, come up with something better. Your choice of words is so odd that it completely ruins the flow of your story. Other than that, it was okay I guess. It would have been better if there was some dialogue or something. Also, I was unclear on whether she knew the guys or just psychically became aware of their names because it was easier for you to write. If you cleared that up, it would make the whole thing a lot clearer. It didn\'t suck, I\'ll give you that much. I\'ve read far worse. :)

What the fuck!? Is she a fucking ferret or something. Really, were you trying to be funny or something? If you were, you did not succeed.