rate_review Reviews

The only problem I had was you sometimes substituted the name Jason for Justin's or Jeremy's name otherwise it was a really good story.

Umm any plans of continuing this story cuz I really enjoyed it and would like to see more.

damn that was HOTTTTTTT ... i couldnt stop reading till the end ... it got me so hot .. now i gotta find ma husband ;) keep it going hun ur doing great .. like i said before maybe getting it published in playboy or somthing? gotta share this shit around!

Well I'd have to say that I have read a few short sotires that ppl have sent me (which were good... nothin against them) but I'd have to say that this story was the best I have read so far... The details are impressive an the fact that it is not just full on hard core sex appeals to me. I would think it great if there was a conclusion/sequal to this story... there is so much room to explore more into it an there is room there to expand the characters... but that's just what I think......

omg the best read ever dont no how u did it but the young girl brought back memorys from my younger years. and to top it all when finished reading me and the misses had the best fuck ever we both aggree you should keep writing this stuff. absoutly amasing. thank you. would encourage anyone who likes erotic ficton to buy this noval.

I was just wondering if you have abandoned this story or Wright a continuation or is that it to me it sounds as if you meant to Wright another chapter but abandoned it enstead witch kind of disappoints me

I usually stay away from the group sex stories because if not written well, they just get repetition and boring, or into just sex on the page. This is a lovely piece. It is a time limit: the weekend. The characters are actually humane: they didn\'t rape the girl or force her, there were no sub or dom stuff which gets to me sometimes, besides, there is so much of that in this type of erotic fiction whether printed and selling or just online to share. The story is kind of like every girl\'s sexual initiation fantasy: three gorgeous guys who pampered their \'princess\' and were considerate, and the girl didn\'t go through annoying moral thoughts or \'Oh no, I shouldn\'t be doing this.\' but doing it anyway and feeling bad afterwards. That type of wavering from one to the other gets me soooo irritated that I stop reading for about a few paragraphs or so. Moreover, the language used in this piece of writing is actually relatively decent which is a wonderful change. I mean the characters in the stories are actually healthy people enjoying sex and sexual perverts getting off by hitting girls across the face while they rape her and stuff like that. By jove, anyone can do that! Thus I really really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing it!

You need to add a Disclaimer. I relly like it this story a lot and would hate for it to be deleded for not having a disclaimer

That was a great story and well writen.

I like your story a lot. Its super hot and sexy. But I don\'t like it how you make Corina pee after her orgasms. Its really gross. And the first chapter... I don\'t get it. Was it a dream or did the pool workers actually did something to her?