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for Everything You Want

by foamyfan15010

person Cass
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW..... He is so nice, you really are quite sappy aren\'t you? Good, I need sap in my life right now. He is her hero, fighting fights in her stead, how nice of him. Alright I like this story, sap included.
person GirlFixer
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teehee :D I really liked the newest chapter. I\'m enjoying this immensely and I look forward to more chapters :)
person GirlFixer
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teehee :D I really liked the newest chapter. I\'m enjoying this immensely and I look forward to more chapters :)
person Sex For Guitars
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, your characters, even your sister! Well, maybe not the last part. I do love this story though. You make the characters very solid and believable while weaving an addictive storyline around them. I put on \"Sultans Of Swing\" then pulled up your story and my whole day turned from bad to good. While the current situation Bella and Cole are in is rather depressing, it\'s still very refreshing to watch as all these obstacles build their relationship up (I hope). The melancholy also adds a reality factor, which grounds the story and makes it less of a happy go lucky fairy tale (or stereotypical teen romance, which is basically the same thing). Keep up the good writing! I hope it doesn\'t interfere too much with your lazy time, because I know all about how that is.
person GirlFixer
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the two chapters I missed and I have to say, I fall more in love with this story every day :) Oh, and if you think my bubbly boo email addy is unique lol you obviously haven\'t heard my hotmail one :P
person JoJoTheRabidBunnie
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bwhaahaahhaha!!!!! I love this story I mean seriously! I love it (although I think you got your inspiration from fruits basket :P, good thing) I love cole, I wish I had someone like him T.T You write so well and all of your characters are so beliveable ya know

Keep it up!!
person Amber
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! i\'m so glad i got bored today and decided to look for more stories lol i havnt been able to stop reading!!! update soon!!!
person Tirch
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the first four chapters of this story over the past two days, and just needed to say how much I am enjoying it. I find the characters interesting and multidimensional. You leave the reader with bated breath, hoping for one thing but fearful that another might happen. So great job! Just wanted to tell you that.
person Cass
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how often you do that updating thing, it\'s great, I personally suck at the updating thig. Anyway this story is funderbar, (er wonderful) and I truly hope you keep writing it.
person GirlFixer
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow another chapter! I love this story :) I also really like the speed with which you bring us chapters. Go you :)