rate_review Reviews

This keeps getting better and better. Good job! I\'m glad more people are reading and reviewing now, because I think this story is fab.

Ha! I just read the last two chapters and I must say, wonderful! I\'m so glad that things have worked out! Yes, it was a bit sappy, but I can work through that. Keep on rockin\' with a flying V, because you are a great writer. Keep the punches rollin\'.
(Oh, and I saw the pictures. Very nice!)

*stares at the story before bursting into applause.* I love it! You have me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen next. I love your usage of words and phrases throughout the chapters thus far. They\'re very colorful and different and thats a good thing to have in a story. They add so much that they make your story wonderful, keep it up. I can\'t wait to see how things play out? Will our pompous dereck return to find cole in his place? and will he does something...drastic? *grins and holds out a plate of cookies* I\'ve heard authors love these things.

_Kitsu

OMG HAHAHA, Ms.McCloon groping Cole AHAHAHA priceless

Ms.Mcloon is awesomely rocking a flyin V awesome. I loved this chapter, because the whole thing with them getting ready for school was great. You are really good at developing your characters, giving them each very unique personalities, then creating a solid storyline to boot. Keep up the good work!
(and pictures? Hmm, interesting.)

This is a great story. I love the interaction between the characters; each person has so much personality. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Yet another great chapter. They just keep gettin\' better and better. Though they are a bit sappy and mushy at points, the story itself is still very strong. I still love it! Wait, I will. For more awaits on the horizon, I hope.

I want more! You definitely know how to keep us interested and hooked on the characters and storylines.

HA! Cole\'s mom rocks a Flying V. That was a great chapter. I loved the whole thing with Bella making up a disease. Keep up the good work! I\'ll hold my sister\'s stuffed Evil Monkey hostage until the next chapter! (Am I kidding? Only the Evil Monkey knows)

Yet another great chapter. My only question is, Rehab or Cold Turkey? I bet you already have it all planned out though, don\'t you? Yup, you do. Don\'t lie to me. Anyway I hope Bella\'s Father fixes himself, because I\'m siding with Cole. Bella has been hurt too much, and she\'s lucky she has a wonderful guy like Cole who gives his living breath for her happpiness and welfare. I love this story and eagerly anticipate the next chapter. EAGERLY. HA, no pressure (Ya know I love ya, please don\'t hate me). I\'m glad I made your day, yay me! ^_^ Keep on rockin\' on!