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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I kinda thought that\'s what Derrick was up to. Loving ya! :D
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAARRRRRGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!! WHY?! WHY?! Why would you do this to me, this is cruel and unusual punishment. Who in their right mind would break up with someone as wonderful as Cole, no one I tell you, if Bella doesn\'t want Cole I do! Send him to me!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAARRRRRGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!! WHY?! WHY?! Why would you do this to me, this is cruel and unusual punishment. Who in their right mind would break up with someone as wonderful as Cole, no one I tell you, if Bella doesn\'t want Cole I do! Send him to me!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY YESSSSS!!! This means that the story is finally getting to my favorite part, the struggle. For some reason that is my favorite part in a romance novel... To see two people struggle to get their relationship back in order or move away from it. So keep at it...
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO! While I must say that was a brilliantly executed chapter I still say NOOOOOOOOO! The shit has hit the fan, and I want to beat Derick into a pulp, then slap Bella for being so stupid. GAH.
Here\'s a plate of cookies though, because that really was a very well written chapter. I can\'t wait for tommorrows, even if it is a little forbodding.
(And sorry to hear about the car, that sucks. My Honda is in the shop right now because someone rammed my passenger side door while I was parked. So, I can feel ya.)
Here\'s a plate of cookies though, because that really was a very well written chapter. I can\'t wait for tommorrows, even if it is a little forbodding.
(And sorry to hear about the car, that sucks. My Honda is in the shop right now because someone rammed my passenger side door while I was parked. So, I can feel ya.)
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed chapter 17. I knew people didn\'t change overnight! I do hope things work out in the end, though. Can\'t wait to read more!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update, update, updated! Now, now, now!!!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trouble in Paradise! I smell a bad wind blowin from the east. I loved the drama in this chapter, yet the ominous feeling I got was rather forbodding. I hope everything works out, because what Bell and Cole have now is rare and special. It doesn\'t need to be ruined by lies and pompous assholes coming back into the picture (yes, I still hate Derick, or however you spell it, even if he apologized and turned around). I hope Bell gets her act together. Keep on rockin on with a flyin\' V.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are such a damn tease! But I love you anyways :P
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, fluffy, and choke full of sweet, creamy revenge. That rocked, yet I must say, what a tease you are. Anyway, can\'t wait for more! Keep on rockin\' on!