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Ha, I can fell Bella\'s pain. Tattoo\'s hurt like a bitch, I know the one I got sure as hell stung something nasty. Anyway, I was hoping for more of a conflict, but that\'s just me. I\'m overjoyed that the lovers finally reunited, becuase I had a feeling both resolves were slowly weakening. Plus, the waiting was torture! Torture! *Mock death*
*Zombie Revival* Anywho I\'m a little set back that a spinoff isn\'t in order but you hold the pen..er...word processor....so I judge not. I look forward to seeing how Lacey and Dad Dude do together.
(Ayashi no Ceres! I loved that anime, and yes...it was horribly depressing. Ya\' know another depressing one you should watch if you ever get the chance.....Grave Of The Fireflies. Sad, but very well done. Or you could go the easy route and watch the last three episodes of Cowboy Bebop.)
Rock on!

This story is incredible! I\'ve just spent the last few hours glued to my screen reading chapters 1-22. I was about to leave a review begging you to continue when I noticed you\'d just updated today, so I won\'t do that. But know that in my heart I\'m begging and looking forward to more. Your characters are carefully thought out and *real*. I feel their pleasure and their pain. Oh boy do I feel their pain right now. I can only imagnine what you\'ll make me feel when they get back together. I was hoping you\'d take the Dad/Lacey angle from the first mention of Ms. McCloon, that\'s a great thought. I\'ve one piece of completely constructive critisism to offer, and I hope you don\'t mind. It\'s just something I\'ve been told time and time again with my own writing and have found it comes in useful- it\'s really not entirely necessary to start a new paragraph for each sentence if the same person is saying (or thinking) it. Unless you put \'Cole thought\' after each of his thoughts in a different sentence, it gets rather confusing trying to decipher if we\'re seeing Cole\'s thoughts or Bella\'s. See what I mean? Like I said, I hope you don\'t mind. Personally, I love constructive critisism so often times I stick my foot in my mouth offering it when it\'s unwanted. If this is the case, it was unintentional and I apologize. I look forward to many more chapters from you, you\'re an amazing author who is now bookmarked on my computer!

If you have not already decided on what happens in \"Breaking Point\" then can you make it a giant fight? Thats when the story really gets good. No romance is a romance unless there is a breakup...

I must say, I do like this side romance developing. Do I smell a spinoff story? I hope so!
I\'m glad Bella\'s dad found Lacey, I always thought they would make an amusing match. Yup, that they hopefully will. I loved that whole library incident, it really threw a monkey wrench into the whole situation. I hope those two figure out there problems soon, because I love struggle and all, but not when I can\'t just read it all at once! This is torture!
Hehehe, can\'t wait to see this whole tattoo thing play out. This should be interesting.
Ah well, you\'re doing awesome. Keep on keepin\' on! You rock!
Cookies and props!

Hey, sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while. I\'ve still been reading though! I really enjoy reading your story and I\'m addicted. Thanks for the pic aswell. It was really cool :)

Yipee! Looks like 2 romance stories in one or this one is going to create the Rober, Lacey spinoff... Either way is good.

Great chapter. I always enjoy this certain stage in romance stories, I guess it\'s because you get to see the underside of the two lovers. Oh, and the song, i liked it. I was listening to Eve 6 before I pulled up your story though, and then Here\'s To The Night came on halfway through my reading....I just though it was rather appropriate for the chapter. You rock! I can\'t wait for more.
Here\'s some cookies...now please write more!

I change my view on liking struggles in stories.. I only like them when the story is complete so I can get to see what happens. (I hate waiting!)

Very nice chapter :) I love Damien Rice! Been a huge fan for ages :)

You among other authors here need to clone yourselves and have said clones write forever because I hate the wait... Nice chapter.. What was up with the songs though? I always skip past them so maybe you can fill me in.