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for Everything You Want

by foamyfan15010

person Theres
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i can\'t believe you killed Cole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m in utter shock! OMG
person Taty-chan
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re bad! Poor girl... just when she found happiness...
person GirlFixer
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God Almighty, what a chapter! It was so sweet then you left us hanging! Damn you! But this is so exciting. You better update soon lol :P
person Sex For Guitar
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.....wow.....damn...you are mean. I\'m hangin\' on a string here! That was such a rollercoaster ride of emotions...from happy and fluffy all the way to depressing and heartwrenching. I say once more, you are an amazing writer.
Looking into the future, I hope you continue to write because this is an amazing story and you have an awesome talent.
Rock on with a flying V!
person iotc247
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yipee there we go.. If I cannot get a breakup I mine as well get an injury.. Little bit of drama is a good thing.. Lets see how it turns out..
person Leylia
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you bitch. That\'s just mean. Mean, mean, mean.

*cries*

(By the way, I\'ve been really enjoying this story! Hehe.)
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! how could you do that???? just when they were happy!!!! please let him be alright..please!!!!! ( omg i\'m LOVING this...but he better be alright or else i think i\'ll just cry my eyes out... :) )
person Tirch
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It was sweet, sexy and sad all mixed up in a blender. I can\'t wait to see how you decide to deal with this. I don\'t know, sometimes tragedies make the greatest love stories...
person iotc247
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinda am disappointed. Not really at you though its just was hoping for more then a small struggle where no one is hurt.. (Don\'t hit me...... It is just what makes me like romance novels even more...) Other then that though I guess its good that they got back together..... I wonder whats going to happen next as well once a couple is back together my ideas (which are few and rare) short circuit. See ya tomorrow.. (Unless of course you happen to updated sooner.. Like um every hour or half hour... Either is fine)
person GirlFixer
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeee! I can\'t wait for the next chapter :P