rate_review Reviews

Hope. Thank you.

In my opinion, you have nothing to apolgize for as a writer. This story has been beautifully written. The love and tenderness portrayed were realistic from the innocent discovery to the deepening of feelings to the problems that arise despite the strenght of love to the bittersweet pain of loss. This chapter was heartbreaking to read, bringing tears to my eyes, but so honest I want to commend you. I cannot wait to read more of your stories.

You have 3 options. A) You write a sequel where she finds love again somehow.. B) You continue this one and she finds love again somehow.. C) You do one of the above. Don\'t make us hunt you down!!

that so so unbelieveably sad!!!!! but good!!

People read love stories to escape and to get hope, hope that there is better waiting for us. Because without hope there is no life. I started reading your story 2 days after the love of my life died, I searched the net for a love story that made me think of him and me and in your story I found it and I thank you for that but even in a story it seems I cant find hope.

Melancholic romance stories and death metal music don\'t match...bleh. Anyway, your last two chapters have succesfully stir a feeling of remorse so strong within me, that I have cried. I must say, you really are a great writer. I know I say that alot, but you really are. This story has quickly become one of my favorites. The whole rollercoaster of discovery, love, passion, need, loss, and bittersweet tragedy...is brilliant. I clapped with glee when the first kiss was exchanged, I cried when bella sat in the street and clutched Cole\'s lifeless body with disbelief and denial. I read this last chapter sharing Bella\'s emptiness. You need not apologize for anything, as it is your story and you did a brilliant job with it.
*Stand and applaudes*
I can\'t wait for more.

Well, what can I say? You definitely made Cole\'s death unexpected and it really was a total shock to me. This is a good thing, though, as living happily ever after doesn\'t always happen, and I\'m glad that you decided to address this. Chapter 26 really made me cry - you\'ve done a great job with this story! I truly think you have an amazing talent, and I hope you continue to write more stories, as you\'re writing abilities are ace. Well done!

Incredibly moving chapter. I was really impressed with the way you portrayed feelings of loss, hopelessness and denial. Bravo!

Brilliantly beautiful chapter! I had a feeling that things were taking a turn for the worse after that cliffhanger, and unfortunately I guess I was right. You nailed me to my chair and I read the whole chapter stunned. The feeling of loss and desperation...of heartbreak and sorrow...it was so powerful. Wow.
I can\'t wait \'till tommorrow!

Ok I asked for a struggle BUT NOT FOR HIM TO DIE!!! What kind of shit is that!!! Something better happen because well I don\'t see what you are going to do now..