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for Cross My Heart

by aidsbunny

person bitterkandi
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic! Mae and Koan are the cutest. They really love eachother. I wish there were more stories out there like this one. Great job!
person Phil
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic was really good. I think you did an excellent job. Keep up the great writing!
person Steal
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A lovely story. Well written and easy to get absorbed into. The characters were believable and thus made the story much more than that average short story. I do hope you write more. ^_^
person Brandy
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Heather, I have to say that that was quite a climactic *cough* ending. Hehe. It was an excellent story! I\'m glad that you were finally able to piece everything together, though probably not as happy as you are about it, huh. You did a fantastic job tying everything in. I really do hope you write the sequel with Vince. If you don\'t do it now, I hope you save the idea and work on it later. I\'d like to see Mae and Koan living together later in life. Well, that\'s enough from me. Hope it was a decent review.
person Silver
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaat? I think that is the first good yaoi story I have read to date. *applause and cheers*