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for The Innocent Wife

by jakelyon

schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Solid writing. The main character appears mature and yet unsettling naiv. Would be great to read more.
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, more soon!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear, all of your stories are way to freakin hot... damn you\'re good.

Update... please!
person l\'etje
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going maybey she could do it withe the neighbour.
post soon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I saw the Phantom of the Opera reference in there...were you trying not to let it show?
person Loopypants
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting!