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for Soul Fires

by Miaren

person lo
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapater. I like the world that you set up, and I like the style and way in which you write. I can\'t wait so see what happens next.
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is that the end?
person lo
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This cute and very well written! I like what you are doing in building this realtionship and creating this world. Toy have done a very good job.
person randomlurker
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleasepleaseplease write more! This is so interesting for an original, their whole universe, the two prodigies meeting, their studies, how they\'re both different...you have to keep going with this one, it\'s great! I\'ll definately be looking back in hopes of an update.
person Yami Tenshi
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting. These are my kinda stories.
person Rissie
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, oh my God, ohmigod...

...Yes. That is my answer. You rock. You roll. You can do whatever you want, so long as you promise you\'ll never ever STOP writing this. It\'s brilliant. It\'s wonderful. It is SO bloody good.

As you can tell, I\'m very happy with this fic. :3

I have no complaints with this chapter/part - There weren\'t any obvious typos, the sentences flowed, and the general...OhMyGodness made it a really nice start. ONWARDS!
person subjunctivity
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write really well. I like the story and I am interested in seeing the art you create.

The only odd thing I noticed was your referring to the characters by their hair color, but perhaps I hadn\'t paid enough attention to the descriptions earlier.

Anyway, good job! ^_^
person StoryJunkie
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Prologue was a bit too brief for my liking, otherwise, pretty articulate