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for Apsara

by Renfield

person lli
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was so creative, you have a wonderful imagination. I really like the six arms and the enormous member, it was very interesting to read about such a different looking character.
person yvie
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting piece. I am not saying it because there is nothing else to say as so many people seem to think \'interesting\' is just a kind word. It really is interesting. I mean, a sex scene with a god with six arms and a serpent-like tongue, as well as the \'larger than life\' ...em... manly parts(?). This is really cool. Most people when they write about sex with gods or goddesses, these deities always have the power to change totally into human form and apart from the usual extra, almost never-ending stamina thing, they are completely like himans. Now what is the fun in reading about that? Maybe the sex would be great but still I might as well read normal stuff. Anyway, I really enjoyed this piece. The gentleness of the god and the sweetness of the girl gave it such a warm feeling that made it more than just a one-shot sex scene. There is an atmosphere of sweetness romance in the air although it was not a romance. Geez, now I have gone and made this review so long. Sorry, didn\'t mean to do that but I will look out for your stuff!
person Manders1953
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, I think it would have been hilarious, not to mention hot, if he did do her again. And more times after that.

She\'d probably think she had died, but hey, it\'s not like it would be a bad way to die? lol! Great job!
person Sens
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. Geezus. I\'m just lucking out today, finding all the best authors. Fantastic. There\'s just something so sexy about having six arms. Now that I\'m think about it, I\'m not going to get a moment\'s rest. It\'s very beautifully written. And who cares about names? \"My god.\" should be sufficient enough. Haha. You will grace us with another chapter, won\'t you?
person night
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I like the tenderness and the roughness at the same time. You put everything together very well.
person chits&chits
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I\'m serious, this is one of my favorites here on Aff. The ending especially was unexpected but good.
person Ashley
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, very original plot, I loved it!
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.

That was beautiful. Positively exquisite. The detail was amazing, you write in a manner that flows wonderfully... Time to go back and reread it!

I think I need to join a religion that involves sacrifice... Hell, I\'ll even volunteer for that!

~Kit
person Bubbles
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous! More please. :)
person Loopypants
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Great detail. Absolutly wonderful!