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for Seren's Story

by Serendipityma

person TT
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is sick and wrong, what her father\'s putting her through. i hope she gets away!
person katrina
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story. I hope you will add more to it. It kept me wanting to keep reading...
person MarikIshtar77
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, hell fucking yeah, girl! Your muse is rawkin\'!! So much power behind this story, so many emotions, and so easy to get addicted to! Keep it up, babe! I\'m hooked!
person sam
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg aaaaaaaah she had the baby
person TT
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
an update! aww the baby seems ok. i really liked reading this story. do continue.
person B.
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
strange, but not bad. Kinda like it!
person Tiera
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just a heartbreaking story. It is very well written and narrated by Seren. I like the fact you told the story from the victim’s point of view because it is that much believable. Her father is a wretched coward indeed. Will Seren ever find out why her mother committed suicide?

Please, do continue.
person stunned
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this was not based on someone\'s reality. That would be so cruel. I\'m stunned about the horror in this poor girl\'s life. The fact she has not killed herself is amazing. Her father and friends are just to fucked up for words.
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phenomenal!!! Bravo!! I\'m so glad you chose to post this!! I\'m am SO going to send my reviewers over to read this when I post my next chapter of HRII. I know they will love you! You write SO DAMN GOOD!
I\'m off to read more now, thank you for hooking me up with this!
*big hugz*