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for Seren's Story

by Serendipityma

person MarikIshtar77
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! What a sweet ending! That was a great way to polish this baby off. Excellent writing! I hope you plan to post another story soon.
person Faerie
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely incredible story, one of the very few who keep me scrolling down, wanting more and more. Never before have I cried, been wide-eyed, smiled, and cheered for joy at a story written on this site. (A lot of stories are poorly written.) This is an amazing story, I read it front to back (err... internet wise atleast) in one night. I love the first person aspect, the romance vibe, and it sort of reminds me of my life (or a smaller scale, I was molested as a pre-teen, and I fell in love with an Australian boy.) I can\'t find words good enough to express the fantastic factor this story holds.

Keep up the incredible job.

-Faerie
(phj3artehbunneh@gmail.com // SignedAngel on this site.)
person Darkness_Takes_Over
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cries*

That was so sad. I\'m so happy for Seren! She finally got free! Excellent work! This is being added to my recommended stories!
person Tiera
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i\'m so happy Seren got out of there! i\'m happy she\'s with Chase and the\'re going to have a family!

this story was very good and i enjoyed reading it. please! write more sometime!
person sam
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg thats soo good
person Darkness_Takes_Over
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first four chapters of this story and it is so sad. Seren has such an asshole of a father. The way he treats her and allow his friends to have their way with her is horrible. But it is a very enjoyable read!
person Darkness_Takes_Over
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! She has decided to go with Chase! Aww!
person Darkness_Takes_Over
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Her dad is such a cruel son of a bitch - pardon my language. lol. This story is so gripping, I\'m in love with it!
person dynamiteplay
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. please please please continue! I must read more chapters or I\'ll drive myself insane.
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man i feel so bad for her, i hope she has a happy ending tho.