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for Seren's Story

by Serendipityma

schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was brilliant, it had feeling and emotion and I had a smile when the character finally get away to be with the man she loved.
Well done!!
person xsx
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing!
person Lindsey
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! that story is amazing!!!!! I love it but OMG that f*cker needs to seriously die slowly!! I love Chase such a sweet boy and YAY I was so worried it would be Jackass dads thankfully it was his!! you should write more hunni you rock at it....probally one of the best stories I have ever read!!
person Jay
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE I LOVE URE STORY JUST FINISHED IT TODAY IT MADE ME CRY AND I DONT USUALLY CRY LOL GREAT WRITING
person Catherine
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~Amazing story, love it!~
person Jessica
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, although it was very sad and it hit close to home.
Very good job. Keep up the good work.
person la
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've never read an original before. i liked this, despite much of the subject matter. there were times when i felt frustrated that she just didn't leave - like when she went to work she could've run off, but then she wouldn't have Chase. It would've been nice to know for definate if her mother had killed herself because she 'knew' or she just had other major issues. Or maybe her dad drugged her and cut her up real bad. In the end I'm glad she escaped to austrailia ! and with Chase and the baby!! Really enjoyed reading it from start to finish. thanks for posting
person ashinator
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is incredible. i can't imagine how traumatizing stuff like this can be on people. :[ australian guys are awesome XD
person Jane
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. I cried multiple times. Very well written. I look forward to your following work. <3
person Lori
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*clapping* Bravo! well done! I\'m so glad I took the time to read your story tonight. It was fabulous. You really have a knack for making the reader *see* the drama unfold in front of their eyes. Good job. Be sure and let me know when another story is done.