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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm.... So far I really like your story.. your characters are very interesting. My only bone of contention is Seana\'s behaivor. Jared raped her multiple times, and she doesn\'t seem to be the torture loving type. Shouldn\'t she be anything but happy and girly. Man I\'d still be plotting my escape.
Great story keep it up.
Lensa
Great story keep it up.
Lensa
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How wonderful. I love this story so much! Can\'t wait for the next chapter:)
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Chapter Seven
I like this, it\'s cool, interesting, creepy and keeps you thinking. There\'s a couple grammatical mistakes, my favorite I believe being \"Jared’s eyes lit up when he took the lid off the box and a puppy pooped out.\" I\'m sorry, I just couldn\'t stop laughing thinking about a box pooping out a puppy instead of popped out. It just struck me odd--It is 3am here...
Anyway, I\'ll be looking forward to the next chapter!
--Dhampir
I like this, it\'s cool, interesting, creepy and keeps you thinking. There\'s a couple grammatical mistakes, my favorite I believe being \"Jared’s eyes lit up when he took the lid off the box and a puppy pooped out.\" I\'m sorry, I just couldn\'t stop laughing thinking about a box pooping out a puppy instead of popped out. It just struck me odd--It is 3am here...
Anyway, I\'ll be looking forward to the next chapter!
--Dhampir
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This story is really sadistic! And damn I am hocked on! Cant wait for the update! Two thumbs up for this! Keep it up!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its awesome, you have to update soon!
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tell you\'r friend that she\'s an amazing writer!
It\'s wonderful!
It\'s wonderful!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still love this alot cant wait for the next chapter.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man Jared is a real ass aint he? I am thinking he has already changed drastically from before she got there, well least he didnt kill three more women. *shrugs.* But seriously, he is an ass. Although I did like this story alot, and I think its getting a little more interesting, he is acting weird tho, you think hes mean one minute then he turns nice the next? Whats up with that? Anyways, you did good, and I rated a five for every chapter I read, Update soon ill keep an eye out for this story.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.