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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was awsome!!! everything in it was writen well, and kept me interested the whole time. i can't wait to read the sequel, i dont know if i would wanna read a story about one of the other. unless it was like interesting to no end. well, i leave a review you leave more good story, and i come back. please E-mail me when you put new story up. Thanks. update soon.
Ja-Ne =^_^=
Ja-Ne =^_^=
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just read the ending. I'm happy Jared and Seana ended up together and even better they had sex that both of them enjoyed. Even more better, Jared couldn't torture people the way he use to. Seana affected him as much as he affected her. However, the ending felt rather rushed and anitclimactic. There seem to be a lot of loose ends - her home life, his father, Grey - to list some.
Still, I very glad that there will be other stories about this world and a sequeal to this one. I look forward to them.
Still, I very glad that there will be other stories about this world and a sequeal to this one. I look forward to them.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
drat!! one of the best stories i've ever read here.. Although there are a few spelling mistakes, torturer not torches.
keep me updated!!
keep me updated!!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, why should I read your fic if you can't even make your summary grammatically correct?
No, it (it's) not what your (you're) thinking. Its (It's) about a girl going into another demension (dimension) and having a very twisted ruler fall in love with her. But there (they're) all human.
No, it (it's) not what your (you're) thinking. Its (It's) about a girl going into another demension (dimension) and having a very twisted ruler fall in love with her. But there (they're) all human.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleaz tell me it wont end ther....
and if it do
pleaz finish it!!!!!!!
and if it do
pleaz finish it!!!!!!!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes i knew she lovesd him dispite the rate and beatings :O i hope he has changes a little since she's been gone. thanks for updating!!!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all this story is beautiful....tragic and gory yes but the emotions running in the words and the descriptions of everything surrounding the characters is breathtaking. Great creativity and plot line...it's not cheesy or redundent like every other story based on Beauty and the Beast, it has it's own magic to it, it's own appeal so to speak. I can't see how your freind could be ashamed of writing this great work it's magnificent and if there is a next chapter than I can't wait to read it and find out what happens after she returns home and what happens to him! Can't wait!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well first of all, I just read this story about 2 months ago and I thought chapter 8 was simply the end. Of course, I am very happy to know that I was wrong. Second, this was a very good story and well written. I feel there is real good chemistry between Seana and Jared, but boy does he have a dark side. Also, could he ever have sex with her without rapping her. Still, I like the fact that she fights agaist him, despite her fear of him. She had a good reaction to run, like when he killed that man with the sipder, and had the common sense to return to him so other would not be killed.
Now, after reading the very short chapter 10, I have to ask - Is THIS the END??? I could only hope it is not.
Now, after reading the very short chapter 10, I have to ask - Is THIS the END??? I could only hope it is not.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is to all the Fans of Beauty and the Best
There will be an update soon I promise. Sorry for the long time between update (almost a year) but do to some problems on my end i was unable to update but now (as soon as i can find the story again) i will up date. there are also two other stories that are one their way (hopefuly). one is a fan fic i'm going to do of this story and the other is by the story's true owner. so please wait just a little longer. thanks
There will be an update soon I promise. Sorry for the long time between update (almost a year) but do to some problems on my end i was unable to update but now (as soon as i can find the story again) i will up date. there are also two other stories that are one their way (hopefuly). one is a fan fic i'm going to do of this story and the other is by the story's true owner. so please wait just a little longer. thanks
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright. thats it. ive waited long enough... i check damn near everyday to see if the story has been updated, and to my dissapointment, u have not. tell ur friend to start writing!!! now!!! im just kidding, i love the story and am really looking forward to the new chapter... whenever it comes.