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by pikacheese

person taye
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok when are u going to write some more. I love it so far and want to read more. Please update soon, like this week.....lol. Keep writing
person cillaxox
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to review, the last couple of days have been a little hectic. So far it\'s off to a good start. I can already see the parallels ^_^
person taye
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah i read ur frist chapter and hated it... haha... just kidding I think you did a good job and can\'t wait for the rest of it. Sorry abut trying to be funny, but i do what I can.
person iotc247
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Any problems with grammar, or spelling I would not have noticed, but I did notice that the story was good. Just keep it up and you\'ll have a winner.