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this is good and I demand you write and actually update this wonderful jargon full fic. the jargon i got. the romance i got. the karma i got that too. what I don't got is a chapter three that wants to be read. don't make your own bad karama.

good job on this fic. i did enojoy it but all would right with the world if you'd finish it.

okay this is weird. i randomly thought of this fic today and when i got on aff.net YOU HAD UPDATED! eep!

Oooh, I adore this. Keep it up, do update soon please.

Oh man, this fic is going to have me grinning all day. Those innuendos were PRICELESS. I mean, seriously... that first paragraph was... hot. =) I never knew baseball could be so naughty. I can\'t wait to read more!