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Go Sin! Gave Zip the ol\' one-two-out the door! In a manner of speaking that is. He was trying to be all slick too...HA! She showed him. But darn him for sayign those things and intensifying her doubts.

I was almost worried that he\'s get his chance to kiss her and then suddenly Eddie would pop in, early from study just to surprise her and catch them. Oh how bad that would be.

I thinks she\'s gonna like that Ohio place more than she will ever admit right now. All that friendly small town lvin\'. There\'s a certain charm about it all. Granted it doesn\'t last long but it is there.

Can\'t wait for the next update!

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Zip!!!!! He should have a random 50 ton anvil fall on him and crush him so we never have to deal with his stupid evilness ever again!

But aside from that, another great chapter, and yay for updates!

no! no! don\'t let doubts get in the way. yay, got that out of my system. I am such a sin and eddie fan!

Damit Zip, you bastard, quit butting in and causing doubts! You fucker!

Reviewing chapter 16, that was a good chapter and thank goodness Sin did not kiss Zip. I believe that Zip has sincere feelings for Sin but he is still a dick. It was funny though how Zip kept saying Eddie from Idaho or Illinois or wherever. I think it\'s really cute to read how Sin is thinking of the future with Eddie that may include marriage, kids and PTA meetings. Thanks for updating.

Zip needs to stay away. He\'s filling Sin\'s head with negative thoughts. I hope everything works out for Sin and Eddie. Opposites can so make it! I hope this trip goes good too. Update soon.

Wow - it sounds like you might be building up to a big break down for the happy couple? It just seems to me that the tension appears to be rising a great deal...
I really like these characters they are very unique and you pull off their interactions well. I hadn\'t reviewed in a long time but I wanted you to know that I am still reading (and loving) your story! Keep up the great work!

Another good chapter, its good to see some problems arise from time to time. Especially since they are so cute about working through it;) Just another sign of what a great author you are.

cool chapter .. slightly different but definitely great as usual.......so keep it up!!!!!!!and i hope uve made it thru ur bloc by now

Reviewing chapter 15, Dina needs to chill out and be more like Eddie:) I’m glad Sin brought up the issue of their differences and that they both know where they stand because I have a feeling it will be brought up a lot from people outside of the relationship. I can’t wait to read when Sin meets Eddie’s parents. I can completely understand Sin hating men after being rape and not knowing your sexual perference for a while. Thanks for updating.