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I\'m so glad that Eddie\'s family liked her and that she was enjoying her stay. I\'m from a really small town in Ohio so I kind of know my fair share of small-minded people like Zach. I also loved how Sin couldn\'t help but be jealous of Meredith. Of course, if I was dating Eddie, I\'d be jealous of any girl near him. And thanks for adding my story. You have no idea how happy that made me. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Another great chapter! maybe sarah and Zip will end up together. As long as he stays away from Sin! As long as he stays away from her and his feelings for her die, I could see myself liking him and reading a story about him finding love with someone else. Update soon.

I hope that Sin finally realizes that just because she isn\'t \"normal\" she can still be with someone who loves her for who she is. She has got to get over these fears and stop getting so defensive at Eddie everytime she gets overly sensitive. I realize that he is an extremley patient person but at some point he is got to get tired of constantly having to reassure when in reality she should be reassuring him about Zip. She has to stop letting Zip mess with her mind or else she is going to mess up a good thing. Great story, please update soon!!! GO ASTROS!!!

I loved it. I think that maybe you were hinting that Ava and Sin might get together but who knows. I think that it would add some drama if Sarah and Zip got together. They both have such big personalities. Great job. I am going to miss this story.

Please dont kill off anyone. I dont think I would be able to handle it. I think I should go to councilling to get over Eve\'s death. You horrible person/terrific writer. :\'[

Reviewing chapter 18, I thought it was a pretty funny chapter towards the end and at the same time it made me think about life. Yeah, it actually did. Eddie standing up to Zach was great but the sad part is that people like Zach do exist in reality. Thanks for updating.

Reviewing chapter 17, how did Joseph become so wise. The most adorable couple is going to have a child. You surprised me with that one. It’s so different but good to read how bashful and apologetic Sin is around Eddie’s family. This was such a sweet chapter. May I make a request please in future chapters write more about Lianna and Joseph:) Thanks for updating.

You have no idea how much i love this story. i check this site almost everyday and this is one of the stories i always check. I love Eddie and Sin. I have one questions though...does Sin have a full name? Or is it just short for something? I\'m sorry if i haven\'t read closely enough or if you\'ve already answered this and if you did i feel really stupid and i\'ll slap myself for you. But You have a wonderful story here. Please continue... :)

Oh no, now I dont want to read the drama filled chapter! *laughs* Dont make me hate you, thats all Im going to say.

YAY an update!!!! AWESOME! I\'m so glad Eddie finally told her! I already have had Why Bother booked marked for me to read once i finish reading Original Sin. LOVE the writing! Keep it up!