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for Original Sin

by Tirch

person templeton21
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re damn right about the sticks and stones, but also, some bricks too.
person Cariad
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT WILL HAPPEN?

What about getting rid of Dave? ;op Nice chapter, and the angst was bearable *hehe*
person Adaee
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chatper 19 review. Great chapter, glad to see that Sin is starting to open up to the idea of them being together in the long run. Keep it up:)
person Adaee
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 review: Another good chapter, good to see that both parties arent just experiencing fun and games. I would like to see some more drama though, as everything they have experienced just seems a little to ... meager. Dont give me reason to hate you though;)
person iotc247
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better be dodging them right now as I throw them at you.. And I don\'t mean sticks.. Im talking about steel columns!
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOO! don\'t send her to the lion\'s den alone. great chapter!
person Leylia
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can\'t remember the last time a story made my stomach clench like it just did. This is going to be bad. Bad, bad, bad. This is a bad idea, Tirch. Why are you doing this? EEP! Please post the next chapter soon and ease my fears.
person Angel
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! I love Eddie. He\'s such a wonderful guy! Sin and Eddie have some time to make up for too once they get home! WoO! ;o)
person Angel
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:oO! I hope everything goes all right! How can you do this to your readers!!! lol
person Ciel
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! You rock! I felt so special when Eddie\'s mom said Cynthia...thanks for clearing that up with me, thats a very clever name to give her. I really liked this chapter...its funny one of my best friends\' name is Meredith and she acts alot like this Meredith...it made me smile, keep writing...but don\'t take that as a push to update i now how annoying that can get sometimes...i\'ll just wait quietly for the next chapter. Thanks!