rate_review Reviews

yes it was an awful chapter. How could you leave us there, with a cliffhanger.

The rest was great as always, and I really liked seeing J&L again, thanks for that. But come on, what does she need to tell him?

You are evil! I can\'t believe you just did that! Grrrrr! But anyway, I love Joseph and Lianna. I\'m glad they were in this chapter but it doesn\'t make up for what you just pulled. Please. Oh my god, please. Next chapter ASAP!

I can\'t remember if I\'ve ever reviewed before, and if I haven\'t I apologise because this is an excellent story.

When I read the next chapter to find out what she wants to say to him, I\'m either going to be very happy or very upset. I don\'t like being upset as a rule, so if sin could tell him she loves him I\'d be very appreciative : )

Once again, excellent story.

Vlad.

Please dont let the next chapter turn bad, please. Do to zip like u did to eve, kill him off. Pwez. Ta

Reviewing chapter 19, Tirch are you on crack? Zip is such a loser and I even liked him a little even though he is a dick but this chapter just made me dislike him period. I would have to applaud Eddie for being an adult than Zip in this situation. Eddie is the ideal man, c’mon I mean seriously, though I do agree that Sin needs to resolve issues or feelings no matter how small it is with Zip, the loser. Thanks for updating.

about the sticks and stones... you\'re right :p haha. but it\'s really only because that was an awful place to end the chapter. i really hate cliffhangers--but i do adore this story. i love your characters :)

After reading this chapter, I would call the next chapter or two The Big Test. I agree with Eddie that Sin needs to go alone. She knows he loves her, but he needs to hear the words from her. I would assume that by Zip\'s words and actions, Sin will come to realize how much she loves Eddie and once back home will be able to tell Eddie this(which will be followed by a great love scene :-) ). I don\'t reallly think Zip will realize in this story that he is not in love with Sin b/c his character development is not as important in this story. In this story, it\'s about Sin and Eddie\'s feelings for each other and their character development. Hope Sin doesn\'t do anything stupid b/c I know Zip will. Update soon. P.S. I for one could definitely see Sin as a good parent b/c she already knows what not to do as a parent from her mother.

Sticks ans Stones? what are you talking about? I\'m picking up tomatoes

It is maybe high time to Zip to understand she\'s taken and happy with that.

I hope Eddie and Sin end up together, because they seem like the best couple, and I want them to be together. lol. And this is an awesome story, and you are an awesome writer.

Wow, Eddie thinks like me...

Darn pessimistic insecure she\'s-too-good-for-me bastard...

This story had better have a happy ending (in other words, Sin and Eddie get married and make babies and such), or people are gonna be angry...